The pia charts bellow show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The two
pia
dish baked in pastry-lined pan often with a pastry top
pie
charts reveal the comparison of five types of
energy
production in France in 1995 and in 2005. Overall, it is
clear
Suggestion
clearly
seen that both of two years
,
Accept space
,
the most important production of
energy
resources were coal and gas
,
Accept space
,
and they were approximate half of the whole
energy
resours
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resource
resources
, while nuclear and other type of
energy
resours
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resource
resources
produced the least proportions of
energy
in France. If we look at
details
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the details
,
energy
was produced by coal
with
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in
29, 80% in the
firt
preceding all others in time or space or degree
first
fourth
year and
this
was
very slight increase
Suggestion
a very slight increase
of about only 1% to 30.9% in 2005 in France. And
this
event was the same in 1995 gas produced 29,63%
,
Accept space
,
that was 30,1% after ten years.
Nevertheless
, another two types of
energy
resources which is nuclear and other
energy
resours
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
increased about to 5% and their proportions of
energy
suitably nuclear 10,10%
,
Accept space
,
while other resources 9,10%. But petrol was one of sources of
energy
which decreased in production from 28,27% to 19, 55%, perspective in 1995 and in 2005.

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