Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Global weather variation is one of the foremost concerns these days. Few

opine

Change to a plural noun

opines

show examples

to deal with Only standard

nations

Use synonyms

are responsible

while

Linking Words

some suggest a worldly attempt is needed.

This

Linking Words

Essay agrees that to handle

climate

Use synonyms

change all

nations

Use synonyms

should raise their hand. My writing will describe both viewpoints.Developed countries need to take more liability to combat temperature variation. Many

People

Fix capitalization

people

show examples

think that facing

climate

Use synonyms

change is expensive for poorer

nations

Use synonyms

, so it would not be a wise decision to authorize responsibility to them.

In

Linking Words

addition

Add a comma

addition,

show examples

developed

nations

Use synonyms

have owned almost all sophisticated facilities and enough financial solvency,

it

Correct word choice

so it

show examples

is not a matter to them to conduct,

climate

Use synonyms

struggling

Wrong verb form

struggle

show examples

. Developing

community

Fix the agreement mistake

communities

show examples

may not offer an expected effort to minimize

this

Linking Words

concern accurately.

For example

Linking Words

, the USA contributes the utmost support to combat

climate

Use synonyms

diversity each year by allotting about $300 million, the biggest

comparing

Wrong verb form

compared to

show examples

others.

On the contrary

Linking Words

, every country requires an equal obligation regarding

this

Linking Words

issue. To

Illustrate

Fix capitalization

illustrate

show examples

, many developing countries are playing a silent role

to deal

Change preposition

in dealing

show examples

with

climate

Use synonyms

affairs, though they are conscious enough about it. Only spending money is not everything for obeying responsibilities, they might offer technical support i.e. Campaign.

Moreover

Linking Words

, they should have less duty at least,

this

Linking Words

definitely ensures less discrimination among all

nations

Use synonyms

. African countries,

for instance

Linking Words

, plant about 60% of total trees yearly, and their immeasurable

contributio

Correct your spelling

contribution

was highly appreciated

on

Change preposition

at

show examples

the

last

Linking Words

environmental summit.

To conclude

Linking Words

, combating

climate

Use synonyms

change is not an

easier

Correct word choice

easy

show examples

issue to control with

few

Correct quantifier usage

little

show examples

national support, despite it needs every regional effort to tackle it nicely. It is always worthy to ensure

allcountries

Correct your spelling

all countries

countries

participation to face

such

Linking Words

an alarming issue nicely.