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some people think that public health is a the responsibility of the government , while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. discuss both sides and give your opinion

#people #health #responsibility #government
It is considered by many that nation's fitness problems are authority of
government
, it is argued by some that those problems are the authority of their own. In my opinion, I believe that people should try being healthy and ministry should help them On the one hand community health problem is politic rule
this
's because medicine and other energy services cost should pay by politic.
For example
,
Accept space
,
there are many people cannot pay for their own problems, who
unemployers
, old ages, disables and children. If there has infectious disease attacked like COVID-19
,
Accept space
,
SARS and malaria
government
 should pay for disinfection and help for low
immunite
the state of not being susceptible
immunity
eminent
imminent
 people.
Furthermore
, air, water and environmental pollutions cause by
government
 and they shall stop it for people's healthy life.
This
's a big impact for people's non-stressed life.
On the other hand
, people should live with healthy life that doing exercises everyday, not using alcohols and cigarettes, eating well-nutrition foods, vitamins and drink sufficient water. If they do those simple habitats people will produce themselves by diseases and they will live happy and healthy. And public strength studies show that most of the reasons strength problems are individual's own habitat and lifestyle because 10 percentages of strength issue causes by
government
 and the other 90 percent are caused by themselves. In conclusion, there are some advantages and disadvantages of both views. And I believe that people should produce their own health and
government
 should make their own rules.

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