The diagram shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two diagrams illustrate the way in which
cement
is made and Use synonyms
then
used for construction. Linking Words
Overall
, limestone and clay go through several steps before Linking Words
bagged
but only 15% of Add a missing verb
being bagged
cement
, Use synonyms
accordingly
, is used for producing concrete.
In the first diagram, limestone and clay are crushed into a smooth powder. After the power goes through a mixer, it is led through a tube into a rotating heater. The mixture, Linking Words
hence
, is heated by a fierce fire. After melting, the mixture is ground into Linking Words
cement
and Use synonyms
thus
Linking Words
being
packaged before being transported to building Unnecessary verb
apply
constructions
.
In the process of producing concrete, it is indicated that concrete consists of a huge amount of gravel (50%), which are small stones. Other ingredients are sand, Fix the agreement mistake
construction
cement
and water, which is 25%, 15% and 10% respectively. These ingredients are all poured into a rotating machine Use synonyms
in
which produces concrete mixers for building purposes.
In conclusion, Change preposition
apply
although
the process of Linking Words
cement
-making undergoes many steps, the way of producing concrete is less complicated. Use synonyms
While
complex equipment is used to produce Linking Words
cement
, concrete-making needs fewer tools.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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