write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged in your letter, you should tell him your name and where you are living, describe the problem, suggest what you want him to do for it

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Dear Sir or Madam,

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am writing

this

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letter to bring

yur

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your

attention to a

road

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problem which is faced by my street at the moment. My name is

johan

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Johan

john

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smith.

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am working as a software engineer in software

comany

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company

and have been living in new market

town house

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townhouse

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no 29 since 2000 along with my family. recently,a

potole

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pothole

has

develpoed

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developed

in the middle of the

road

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that is

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in front of my house. the pit was caused by bad construction of

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road

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the road

a road

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. during the rain, the pothole fills with water and it will be dangerous for drivers as well as for my family.

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few

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a few

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peole

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people

got hurt

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night

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the night

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due to

pathole

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pothole

petiole

potholes

because it

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not visible in the darkness.

furthermore

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, the ewer system is not in good condition, so the water

come

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comes

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from leakage pipes

also

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contibute

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contribute

in damaging the

road

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

145 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Grievance
Deterioration
Hazardous
Impede
Inconvenience
Potholes
Cracks
Collapsed
Uneven
Detour
Repair
Maintenance
Investigation
Infrastructure
Expenditure
Resolution
Improvement
Community
Resident
Safety
Convenience
Traffic congestion
Civic
Enquiry

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