The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the proportion of Americans in six different categories
according to
how often they had meals in fast
food
restaurants.
Overall
, USA's residents tend to eat in restaurants once a week in all three years; meanwhile, the percentage for eating fast
food
daily remained the lowest over the period surveyed.
Initially
, nearly the same patterns of
people
, about 30%, chose to eat in a fast
food
store weekly and once or twice a month. During the
next
three years,
while
the figure of weekly eating out
people
increased slightly,
once
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or
twice a month
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number saw a decline.
Then
, the former fell down to approximately 27%,
by contrast
, the latter rose significantly and reached its peak, at 33%, in 2013. In 2013, nearly 17% and 13% of
people
consumed fast
food
several times a week and once or twice a month respectively.
While
the figure for several times in seven days fluctuated
at
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around 16% to 20%, that of a few times a year witnessed an increase and
then
stayed unchanged from 2003 to 2013. The
numbers
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number
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of
USA's
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USA
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people
who never eat or eat
everyday
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every day
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both accounted for low
percent
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per cent
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, ranging from 3% to 5%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fast food consumption
  • dining frequency
  • decade overview
  • trend analysis
  • to dine out
  • fluctuation
  • sharp increase
  • gradual decline
  • eating habits
  • statistical comparison
  • consuming pattern
  • noteworthy change
  • anomaly
  • periodic comparison
  • data interpretation
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