The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the proportion of Americans in six different categories
according to
how often they had meals in fast food
restaurants.
Overall
, USA's residents tend to eat in restaurants once a week in all three years; meanwhile, the percentage for eating fast food
daily remained the lowest over the period surveyed.
Initially
, nearly the same patterns of people
, about 30%, chose to eat in a fast food
store weekly and once or twice a month. During the next
three years, while
the figure of weekly eating out people
increased slightly, once
or Correct article usage
the once
twice a month
number saw a decline. Add a hyphen
twice-a-month
Then
, the former fell down to approximately 27%, by contrast
, the latter rose significantly and reached its peak, at 33%, in 2013.
In 2013, nearly 17% and 13% of people
consumed fast food
several times a week and once or twice a month respectively. While
the figure for several times in seven days fluctuated at
around 16% to 20%, that of a few times a year witnessed an increase and Change preposition
from
then
stayed unchanged from 2003 to 2013. The numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
USA's
Change noun form
USA
people
who never eat or eat everyday
both accounted for low Replace the word
every day
percent
, ranging from 3% to 5%.Change the spelling
per cent
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