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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as deser or the antarctic. What are the benefit and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

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Exploring new and challenging places is in trend to
stisfy
meet the requirements or expectations of
satisfy
 thrust of travelling. Tourists are more engrossing to travel the hostile and thrilling places which are having extreme
wheather
the atmospheric conditions that comprise the state of the atmosphere in terms of temperature and wind and clouds and precipitation
weather
water
 condition for survival. Advantages as well as disadvantages are associated with travelling to inhabitable places. The following paragraph
tend
Suggestion
tends
 to delve into both aspects of the issue. To positive side, Expedition of hostile places can
give thrilling
Suggestion
give a thrilling
 experience and boost self confidence.
Moreover
, It gives
chance
Suggestion
a chance
the chance
chances
 to experience
serine beauty
Suggestion
the serene beauty
the serine beauty
 of nature as well as one can explore different cultures.
Breathstaking
Suggestion
Breathtaking
repercusions
a remote or indirect consequence of some action
repercussions
 can
built
Suggestion
build
 a new record of
acheiving
to gain with effort
achieving
 impossible targets.
Such
 achievements can encourage others as well and can fame
theirselve
 along with native place.To illustrate, Columbus has
strated
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
started
 his journey
uncerainly
in an unsteady manner
uncertainly
 and he discovered unknown land.
In addition
, one can test his limits and
conqaur
to put down by force or authority
conquer
conquers
 his fears by exploring places which are unsustainable for survival. To
darker
Suggestion
the dark
 side, Travelling to places having extreme
wheather
the atmospheric conditions that comprise the state of the atmosphere in terms of temperature and wind and clouds and precipitation
weather
condintion
the prevailing context that influences the performance or the outcome of a process
conditions
 may have
verge
Suggestion
verged
 effect on
person's health
Suggestion
a person's health
the person's health
. Journey may end into futile outcome which is being planned to accomplish
certain goal
Suggestion
certain goals
a certain goal
. Due to failure, person may not
built
Suggestion
build
 that level of self confidence again and end up lacking self esteem. To cite an example, As per new
huffington
Suggestion
Huffington
 magazine, 23 people lost their life who started
journey
Suggestion
the journey
a journey
 towards mount
everest
a mountain in the central Himalayas on the border of Tibet and Nepal; the highest mountain peak in the world (29,028 feet high)
Everest
.
Additionly
Suggestion
Additionally
, Tragic accident during expedition can be
burden
Suggestion
a burden
 on
family member
Suggestion
the family member
 mentally as well as financially. To recapitulate, Having gone through
length
Suggestion
the length
 and breadth of the topic, It is apparent that
precausions
a precautionary measure warding off impending danger or damage or injury etc.
precautions
preciousness
precaution
 and security must be added while exploring
inhabitat
Suggestion
in habitat
 and hostile places to have worth
experince
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
experiences
 of travelling.

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