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Write a five-paragraph essay in which you classify the types of friends you have.

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In
newly survey
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a newly survey
, the happiness is claimed to be attributed to the friends by the majority of the respondents. By and large, there are eight main genres of friends;
however
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, the most common ones are
dicussed
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussed
 in
this
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 essay.
First
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, it is
absolutelty
completely and without qualification; used informally as intensifiers
absolutely
 the loyal best
friend
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. Sometimes a loyal best
friend
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 is the only thing people need to stay sane. Everyone needs a non-judgmental
friend
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 who will support them no matter what.
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 is the kind of
friend
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 who lets people be a hot mess and
knows
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know
 all of their deepest and darkest secrets, but still loves them all the same.
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, a wise mentor is probably never out of the list. Jesse Jackson once said, “Never look down on
someone
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 unless you’re helping them up.” If having
someone
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 smart, inspiring, and admirable in
life
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 who practices
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 philosophy,
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this
plural of "this"
these
 people are acutely lucky. It can be clearly seen that all the needs for a
friend
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 who inspires
indiviuals
a human being
individuals
 to be better
oness
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
ones
 without making them feel inadequate. Plus, being around
such
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 a person will challenge individuals to better ourselves every day.
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, the wise mentor in
life
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 does not have to be
someone
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 who shares the same occupation or hobbies with them. It is simply
someone
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 who has a few steps ahead of people in
life
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 and has enough wisdom and patience to guide them in the right direction. Ergo, tt can be anyone — a colleague, a
friend
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 who is beyond their years, or an older
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
 — as long as people look up to
this
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 person and want to be more like them.
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,
this
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 world is extremely huge and people all need a fearless adventurer. Because of living in a big world where there are so many places to see, people to meet, and experiences to be had, yet so many of them are stuck in their own routines and forget to, well, live. As a consequence, people all need an adventurous
friend
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 who will pull them out of their shells and introduce them to new ideas, cultures, philosophies, and activities. All above types of friends
dicussed
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussed
,
life
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 is the melting pot
for
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of
 the
varity
a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
variety
 of
genre
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genres
 of
friend
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 and each one makes people be complete. Notwithstanding the
differnces
the quality of being unlike or dissimilar
differences
,
this
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 in conjunction brings people the entire happiness.
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