Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

privacy
outdoor activities
gardening
customization options
renovate
structural changes
investments
appreciation/depreciation
maintenance costs
utility costs
security features
gated entries
surveillance systems
shared amenities
community centers
suburban
rural areas
commutes
urban centers
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