Is it approprite for students and teachers to be friends on Facebook? How much do you agree or disagree with this opinion and why? Giver reasons and examples to support your answer.
All children should be given a free
laptop
when they start high school
. Do you agree or disagree? There is an argument that a complimentary laptop
should be provided to all the children as they begin high school
. This
essay agrees with this
statement,
because in a Remove the comma
apply
nowadays
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apply
laptop
computer is a necessary tool and give
students more opportunities in the teaching process. Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
Firstly
, having the proper tools in the education process gives a lot of benefits. It lets
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save
time, so the students can focus on the key tasks. The current students have access to new technologies and they can Correct subject-verb agreement
saves
use
them. Laptops make research, writing, reading, communication, collaboration, and presentations easier. For example
; pupils who want to do their homework, do not have to go to the library. They can use
online books or use
the school
website to find every material which they need. That gives them extra time to do it more accurately and correctly. Secondly
, the access to a laptop
is very helpful in the syllabus. That gives opportunities to do it
everything Correct pronoun usage
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easier
and more Rephrase
more easily
efficient
. The pupils can exploit a lot of software Change the word
efficiently
such
as classrooms to contact with
different pupils or teachers, Change preposition
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they
can Correct word choice
and they
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presents
data. Wrong verb form
present
This
tool gives one more benefit, as well. The schoolchildren can adopt them in special situations. Instance; in pandemic time they can continue their education process, they
can study without leaving home. In conclusion, Correct word choice
and they
provide
a free Wrong verb form
providing
laptop
for every
who starts high Correct your spelling
everyone
school
is essential to allow every student to develop and give the same chance for everyone to access to
new technology.Change preposition
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite