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 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table depicts the usage proportion of four divergent kinds of
fuel producing
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electricity in five Asian nations during the year
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2005.
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, it is immediately apparent that the utilisation of each type differentiates significantly in these measured countries. To start with nuclear, Japan had the lead using 49% of it for the generation of electricity which was three times as much as that of Singapore
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 South Korea utilized 33% of nuclear having
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dominance over Malaysia
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 14%. Among these nations,
Thailand
 did not have an access to
this
 fuel type. As for coal and lignite, only two countries (Malaysia and Singapore) mainly based the production on these sources and the usage percentage accounted for 61%and 42% respectively.
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, it made up for roughly 3% to 6% of the rest of them. Strikingly, petroleum products were of
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importance in
Thailand
whereas
 its utilisation proportion was below 4%. In terms of hydro and wind South Korea was the dominant, followed by
Thailand
 having a ratio of 48%:19%. Interestingly, the highest percentage of the usage of other sources belonged to
Thailand
 at 42%.
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, those of Japan and Singapore
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 similar to
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39%
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 Malaysia and South Korea utilized 13% and 11% of other types so as to create electricity respectively
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