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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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  The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over
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 time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.     The line graph depicts the amount of books borrowed during June to the September from four rural libraries while latter chart illustrates the percentage of books according to genres.       From the line graph, it can be shown that,
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 the number of books got by Suttonwed dwellers went down up to the 100 in August, it tripled by the September.
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 month, while from West Eaton grew much slighter, after all both reached up to the 150.
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 300, it dropped dramatically that 170 (estimated).     We can witness that fiction books appeal to individuals to read which makes up 43%, while self help books demonstrated less borrows just 10%. As well as, historical and science-based books taken in same quantities which is 14% whereas 19% of books was biographical.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • key features
  • contrasting
  • developments
  • alterations
  • enhancements
  • infrastructure
  • recreational facilities
  • emerging
  • adaptation
  • population growth
  • connectivity
  • accessibility
  • preserve
  • aesthetics
  • analytically
  • livability
  • notable facilities
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