The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

  The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over
this
time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.     The line graph depicts the amount of books borrowed during June to the September from four rural libraries while latter chart illustrates the percentage of books according to genres.       From the line graph, it can be shown that,
although
the number of books got by Suttonwed dwellers went down up to the 100 in August, it tripled by the September.
Furthermore
, the number of books people borrowed in Church, Mount climbed considerably till the
last
month, while from West Eaton grew much slighter, after all both reached up to the 150.
However
, the amount of books that showed 9the highest numbers at the beginning
that is
300, it dropped dramatically that 170 (estimated).     We can witness that fiction books appeal to individuals to read which makes up 43%, while self help books demonstrated less borrows just 10%. As well as, historical and science-based books taken in same quantities which is 14% whereas 19% of books was biographical.
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