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Nowadays, people move from one country to another for work. Some people think children of these families suffer because of this, while others think it is helpful for them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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These days, many people prefer to relocate to another
country
 owing to better work
opportunites
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
 there.
Although
 most people believe that children of
such
 families get
affected
Suggestion
Affected
 in many ways, others,
however
, think that relocating to a developed
country
 is beneficial for children. In my opinion, it is good for a child's future as it gives them the exposure of different cultures and languages. Living in the different countries increase their chances of getting a good job in the future.
For instance
, when a child move to another nation he already knows
the
Suggestion
The
 native language of his parent
country
 and moving to the foreign land gives him
opportunites
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
 to learn the native language of that new place.
Therefore
, children get to learn different languages which act as an added advantage for many multinational
organization
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organizations
 and
such
 candidates are given preference during the selection process of
such
 companies.
On the other hand
, shifting to another
country sometimes
Accept comma addition
country, sometimes
 does not act in the favour of many children. Some children find it hard to adapt to
new culture
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new cultures
a new culture
 and
they
Suggestion
They
feel
cause to fall by or as if by delivering a blow
fell
 out of the place when they join new schools and colleges. Few of them, start isolating themselves in their homes,
therefore
, they might get mental health problems
such
 as depression. In conclusion, families
has
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have
 to go through many changes when they move from one
country
 to another nation, and
sometime
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
 it may lead to
few
Suggestion
fewer
 health problems in children. Children,
however
, get better education and work opportunities in a developed nation.
Therefore
, in my view, relocating to a developed
country
 is certainly helpful for their
carrer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
carrier
care
 and lifestyle.

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