Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages?

The modernization in
world many
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world, many
foods that are
sefed
rescued; especially from the power and consequences of sin
saved
in
barn
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the barn
a barn
barns
and supermarket stores by chemical method. The foods are
gone
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going
to
longer
remain present although waning or gradually dying
linger
into time through chemical.
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essay will discuss at
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details by examples.
First
of all,
this
is
true method
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the true method
a true method
of foods are
keeped
(especially of promises or contracts) not violated or disregarded
kept
more time in
store-rooms
a room in which things are stored
storerooms
streams
storerooms'
. In my view, that things responsible humans are
refresh
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refreshed
refreshing
of foods
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
before it foods don't happen danger
for
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to
health
. Many scientists advise
in
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on
safe natural
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safe, natural
with way van things
that is
better for nutritious in barns. And nowadays every people purchase from supermarkets per things. The supermarkets are
replied
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replying
to qualities every sold for things. I think if foods used with chemicals in kinds, they will increase more dangers
for
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For
people
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peoples'
peoples
health
.
On the other hand
, the chemical in methods of
foods use
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foods, use
at
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in
production and preservation, it is clear more
benifats
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
to companies for income. But
this
is effected people's impact more and more their
health
and so on the chemical to productions
adicted
compulsively or physiologically dependent on something habit-forming
addicted
to artificial to foods.
This
is very
dangers
involving or causing danger or risk; liable to hurt or harm
dangerous
to customers for received. Today
this
method is caused
reborted
made known or told about; especially presented in a formal account
reported
by
press
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the press
and becoming
issue
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an issue
to people. To sum up, the chemicals are used in way to foods
this
is more
dangers
involving or causing danger or risk; liable to hurt or harm
dangerous
for
people
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peoples'
peoples
health but
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health, but
it is
benifats
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benefiting
benefits
to producers,
therefore
this
is
way
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a way
for
dangers
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the dangers
it is denied by government.
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