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The chart below shows information about fuel used in the transport sector in different countries in Europe, compared to the EU average, in 2009 and 2010.

The chart below shows information about fuel used in the transport sector in different countries in Europe, compared to the EU average, in 2009 and 2010.
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The bar chart illustrates
fuel
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 usage for
transportation
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 in six different European nations, and compares these figures to the European average, in 2009 and 2010.
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while
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 the percentage of
fuel
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 used in
Slovakia
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 and Spain decreased,
fuel
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 consumption in Italy, France and
Greece
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 saw opposite trends during the research period.
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, the European average was higher than the figures for all countries, except for
Slovakia
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. In 2009, the
transportation
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 sector in
Slovakia
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 consumed nearly 7% of the total
fuel
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, about 2% higher than in Austria. Italy used about 4.5% of
fuel
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 in
transportation
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, compared to approximately 1% in
Greece
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, which was the lowest figure shown on the chart. Meanwhile,
fuel
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 consumed for
transportation
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 in the other countries accounted for just under 4% of total
fuel
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 usage in each. In 2010, the figure for Austria remained unchanged, at just over 5%, and slightly less
fuel
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 was used for
transportation
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 in
Slovakia
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 and
Greece
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 as illustrated by decreases to just over 6% and 2% respectively.
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, Italy, France, and
Greece
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 all experienced increases of roughly 1% in
fuel
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 consumption.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel, transportation, slovakia, greece with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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