The two graphs below show the percentage of smokers and the consumption of alcohol in litres in selected countries for the period 1960-2000. Write a report for a lecturer describing the information in the graphs.
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The two line graphs illustrate the proportion of smokers and the consumption of
alcohol
in different countries, during a 40-year period, between 1960 and 2000.
It is noticeable that the trend in smoking declined significantly, while
the consumption of alcohol
saw a fluctuating pattern.
Statistically, the highest percentage
of smokers was recorded by Holland in 1960, followed by Japan standing at under 50%. In terms of smoking, USA
with the approximate annual Correct article usage
the USA
percentage
rate was 40%. In contrast
, the figures for smokers in Holland and Japan fell by forty percentage
points in 2000, while
smoker figures in USA
witnessed Correct article usage
the USA
significant
Correct article usage
a significant
percentage
downwards
Turning to the figure for alcohol
consumption, 1960 and 1980 saw gradual
upwards for both countries, Holland and USA. Dutch people consuming Correct article usage
a gradual
alcohol
were 4-to-11 liters
Change the spelling
litres
,
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of, while
while
Americans consumed it from 8 liters
to 10 Change the spelling
litres
liters
. There was a slight change between 1960 and 2000, Change the spelling
litres
under
2 Change preposition
with under
liters
Change the spelling
litres
people
consuming Change preposition
of people
alcohol
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