Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traffic congestion and pollution have become major problems worldwide. Pollution is a particularly worse in big cities. Already several
strategy
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strategies
have been applied to solve
this
issue with one of them is augment the oil
price
.
However
, I believe that there are more plenty solutions
instead
of enhancing oil
price
. Raising the fuel
price
is a short term policy to diminish the
transportation
problem. Undoubtedly, boost the energy
price
will have domino effect
in
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on
other aspects.
For instance
, in my country, Indonesia, which rely on
transportation
, ascending the oil
price
will increase the goods
price
and can increase
raw material
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raw material prices
the raw material price
price
.
Therefore
,
this
regulation
must be consider
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must be considered
maturely before decided by the officials.
Furthermore
, more creative solutions can be
execute
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executed
to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. Governments can make feasible public
transportation
to make sure most of the people switch their habits from private vehicle
to
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for
public
transportation
.
For example
, Netherland
have made
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has made
good cycling track
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good cycling tracks
a good cycling track
for its citizen.
Additionally
, boost the tax for private vehicle
also
can reduce the number of cars, so that the traffic quite friendly for every person. Namely, Singapore has adopted
this
regulation and make all of its people use
train
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trains
to go
for
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to
in
the office and only a
little
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few
of people still use private car for their
activity
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actions
, especially officials and
top businessman
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top businessmen
a top businessman
.
Therefore
, it
show
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shows
is shown
that solutions
such
as building the public
transportation
and enhance the tax is quite possible to be adopted. In conclusion, the rising population and the worsening air quality have made it imperative for governments and individuals to adopt change and reduce the use of private transport. I am certain that there
are
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is
more better
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better
, more effective and more efficient solution to solve traffic problems rather than escalate the petrol
price
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • discourage
  • incentivize
  • environmentally friendly
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • pollutants
  • alternative energy sources
  • sustainable economy
  • disproportionately affect
  • daily commuting
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • comprehensive solutions
  • public transportation systems
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