You work a part-time job in a company, and the company posted an advert seeking a person for a full-time position. Write a letter to your manager requesting to apply for the advertised position. In your letter say – Why do you want to apply? – What are your future goals? – Why would it be beneficial for the company?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter regarding a full-time position available in your organization. Presently, I am employed as a part-time employee at Rabba Foods incorporation. I would like to please you in applying for the posted position of a
customer service representative. Correct article usage
apply
From
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For
past
few days, I was looking for a full-time opportunity because I have finished Correct article usage
the past
my
college and Correct pronoun usage
apply
available
to work full-time. Add a missing verb
am available
Also
, your store location is near to my home so it will be feasible for me to reach home quickly.
In future, I am intended to thrive my communication skills to focus on my personal development. Therefore
, I will be focusing more on my job to achieve my professional and personal goal
. Fix the agreement mistake
goals
Also
, I see myself as a manager of the organization in 5 years.
As you know, the customer requires a well-behaved customer service representative who would provide outstanding service with
communicating with them. So, I believe my personal goal will be undoubtedly productive for the professional goal of the company.
Thank you for your attention, and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Sam,Change preposition
by
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite