Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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School subjects have played major role in student’s

life

. They are essential in building

students

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students'

student's

career. They build up student’s confidence in choosing their aim of

life

. Now a day’s

schools

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school

offer

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offers

is offering

some specific subjects

science

, S.

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, computer and arts at primary

level but

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level, but

they give

option

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the option

an option

to choice among arts and

science

subjects at secondary level. History is one of those subjects which provide us knowledge about our past.

Science

is the field of study concerned with the discovery and describing the world around us by observing and experimenting. On one hand, history is the most significant subject as students can aware about the work, struggle and hardship of their ancestors. History gives

introduction

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an introduction

about the evaluation of recent inventions in the field of

science

and arts. It

also

gives

chance

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a chance

the chance

to learn from their

ancestors

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ancestors'

ancestor's

experiences and

also

avoid

doing

the act that results in something coming to be

making

same mistakes in future. In my opinion, present and future are always linked to the past.

For example

, invention of

mobile phone

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mobile phones

the mobile phone

leads us towards the invention of

IPod

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the iPod

iPod

On the other hand

science

& technology play a vital role in world development. These subjects are the basic building blocks for students to understand the technological techniques.

For example

, if students study engineering at

school

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school, then

then

they may understand how electronic gadgets work.

Besides

these students important soft skills

such

as problem solving and logical thinking will be developed through studying

science

subjects. In conclusion, each subject has its own

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importance

and

benefit

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beneficial

in students’

life

. I would argue that

science

subjects are integral part of modern

life

. These subjects help students to gain useful knowledge through they can change the world while history helps pupil to understand about the roots of any invention

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