Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

School subjects have played major role in student’s
life
. They are essential in building
students
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students'
student's
career. They build up student’s confidence in choosing their aim of
life
. Now a day’s
schools
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school
offer
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offers
is offering
some specific subjects
science
, S.
st
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St
, computer and arts at primary
level but
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level, but
they give
option
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the option
an option
to choice among arts and
science
subjects at secondary level. History is one of those subjects which provide us knowledge about our past.
Science
is the field of study concerned with the discovery and describing the world around us by observing and experimenting. On one hand, history is the most significant subject as students can aware about the work, struggle and hardship of their ancestors. History gives
introduction
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an introduction
about the evaluation of recent inventions in the field of
science
and arts. It
also
gives
chance
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a chance
the chance
to learn from their
ancestors
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ancestors'
ancestor's
experiences and
also
avoid
doing
the act that results in something coming to be
making
same mistakes in future. In my opinion, present and future are always linked to the past.
For example
, invention of
mobile phone
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mobile phones
the mobile phone
leads us towards the invention of
IPod
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the iPod
iPod
.
On the other hand
,
science
& technology play a vital role in world development. These subjects are the basic building blocks for students to understand the technological techniques.
For example
, if students study engineering at
school
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school, then
then
they may understand how electronic gadgets work.
Besides
these students important soft skills
such
as problem solving and logical thinking will be developed through studying
science
subjects. In conclusion, each subject has its own
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importance
and
benefit
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beneficial
in students’
life
. I would argue that
science
subjects are integral part of modern
life
. These subjects help students to gain useful knowledge through they can change the world while history helps pupil to understand about the roots of any invention
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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