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Studies show that many criminals have a low of education. For this reason, people that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can ge a job when leave prison. Do you agree or disagree

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Research indicates that most of lawbreakers have lower education extend than others. Some may argue that criminals should be educated in
prison
 that it is the best
solution
 to reduce
crime rate
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the crime rate
. I extremely degree that it is
effective
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an effective solution
solution
 to fight against crimes. In
this
 essay, I will give examples to support my view. It is the most effective
solution
 that repeated crimes can be prevented by providing proper education to lawbreakers. Crimes are capable of
learning knowledge
Accept comma addition
learning, knowledge
 and job skill, which it is useful help for lawbreakers in the
prison
.
For example
, in my countries, our government
provide
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provides
 ten professional teachers into a
prison
. These teachers teach each lawbreakers different job abilities in order to
having
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have
 a job when they leave a
prison
. Other more
solution
 to the
crime
 rate that teacher teach their students about
detrimental effects
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the detrimental effects
 of committing. Research indicates that cognitive development
happen
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happens
 faster among children who be taught
crime
 situation than those who do not. For instant, it is too difficult to
understanding
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understand
 why children steal money
by
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from
 their parents?
However
, sometime young generation
think
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thinks
 that stealing is a funny action, which mean that they do not cognitive
crime
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criminalize
 is a severe problem in the society.
Therefore
, teaching children during their young play a vital role in the society.
To
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In
 conclusion,
imprison
a vague idea in which some confidence is placed
impression
 is not the effective
solution
 to fight against crimes in the long run. L believe that use the better education is more essential and durable
solution
 to reduce the
crime
 rate.
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