the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity for the years 1990 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of British people raising money for charity by 5 different
age
groups in 2 years 1990 and 2010.
In general, it can be seen that the while
the percentage of British people donating money to charity decreased for all age
groups, the opposite was true that
for Correct word choice
apply
age
Correct article usage
the age
group
51-61 and over 65. Besides
, the proportion of contributors in the age
group
18-25 was the smallest both
2 years.
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in both
To begin
with, the period between 1990 and 2010 witnessed a sharp decline in 18-25 donors of 10% from 17% in 1990. Age
group
26-35 and over 65 had the
similar figures for British people donating money to charity, approximately 32% each in 1990. Over the Correct article usage
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next
10 years saw a gradual decrease in donors of group
26-35 Fix the agreement mistake
groups
of
7% to 24%. Change preposition
from
In contrast
, the figure for Add an article
the group
a group
group
over 65 slightly grew by 3% to 35% in 2010.Fix the agreement mistake
groups
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