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Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 words.

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Environment is a gift of
god
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God
 to the living beings. Developing nations are
also
 living on the same planet on which the developed nations are living. So it is really does not matter at all that, who is having higher responsibility for
this
. Let's discuss in the essay.
Firstly
, it is the responsibility for all of us from all the countries, to take care of
this
 amazing bond with the nature. Because, it is always difficult to take breathe in the polluted environment for all living beings and even for the plants to grow. According to me, cities in the developed countries are having some different techniques to cope up with the climatic changes.
For instance
, the
climate
 like, summer, winter and frost, all are having the precautionary measures for that including both the nations. If any of the country will unable to adapt according to the climatic changes,
then
 it will be difficult
to
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for
 survival for that particular one.
Secondly
, in the developing countries, the government and the local peoples having responsibility to take care of their nation. As we all know the better
climate
 is always responsible for the better agriculture and in most of the countries
for example
 India, most of the employment is dependent on the agriculture or I can say they are earning their bread and butter by working as a farmer. So government managing to maintain dams and canals for the
climate
 change. To conclude, climatic condition changes every 4 months in the country like India, so there should be the preventive measures to cope up with these changes.
On the other hand
, in the developed countries, the
climate
 is
also
 varies
accordingly
 and they
also
 have to maintain their living according to that.

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