write a letter to a friend who has asked if he can stay with you when visiting your country. Include Why you do not have time to host them An alternate date Recommendations for what to do

#friend #country #time #host #date #recommendations

Dear Lisa How are you? I hope you are doing well.You are visiting India. That's awesome!You are going to have lots of fun by having

completely

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different

experiencing

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experience

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here. But I am really sorry, I would not be able to pick you up and keep you at my place over the weekend. But I will arrange for your stay in a nearby hotel. Actually, my relatives are staying

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my house because of

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celebration. But if you have not booked the flight yet, please try coming over the weekend. I will be free by

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.We would be able to spend more time together and you can stay with me.I can let you know some beautiful places you may consider going

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here in India. You might have some places to visit in your mind. I would definitely say that add Golden Temple, Taj Mahal in Agra and Haridwarin your list. I bet, you will love visiting these places. I know you like to try various cuisines. Do not forget to go to Haveli in Jalandhar, Punjab, where you can enjoy the taste of Punjabi food.In

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You would be able to see new cultures and foods. I hope you will enjoy the trip to India. Yours

truely

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truly

Prabh

Mon Apr 27 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

209 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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