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You had a meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write to a local newspaper to give the feedback. In your letter, you should say: • where the restaurant located • what you had for the meal • why do you recomxmend this restaurant to others.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter regarding my review of a restaurant I visited
last
 week at Koregaon Park, Pune. The restaurant is situated in the heart of the city at a well reputed area. The exact address is Lane number 5, Koregaon Park, Pune.
Additionally
, one can look up on the internet to navigate through the exact location of
this
 place. It is a fine dining restaurant and has a multi cuisine menu.
Moreover
, I had been with there with a friend, and so we had ordered a three-course meal which included honey chilli potato as starters and chicken rolled and some drinks. The reason for
this
 place to be recommended are inexplicable,
for instance
, the ambience is profoundly nonchalant and the service is well up to the mark.
Furthermore
, the food is extremely scrumptious and the drinks are refreshing. All in all the restaurants deserves to be advertised, and if everyone should give it a try to know about
this
 diner. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thanking you, Yours truly, Shakib Qureshi
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