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Many employers are now offering their employees the option to work from home. As a results, employees will have much more flexible hours in the future. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Recently, many companies offer workers that they could
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 from
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 leading to several issues both advantages and disadvantages. While some people think that only workers can benefit from
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, I believe it has positive effects on both employees and employers. It is clear that working online could bring about several advantages.
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, people can control their life. In the other words, they have an amount of
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 they have to do and a deadline, and they could decide when and how they complete it. For those who are parents, they can have more time for their children which helps tightening their family.
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,
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 workers are not under pressure and seem to be
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working
efficient
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. Simply because of a large amount of time each day going to
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work, then
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 come back
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 could be replaced for doing exercise or doing housework. Turning to another perspective, there are
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 many issues that both employers and employees must deal with. The
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 thing is the fact that those who
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 at
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 will lack interaction,
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 feeling of loneliness and isolation. Another drawback is the managers and co-workers only communicate via email or social network.
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, if there have any problem it will cause some misunderstanding.
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, it is often better to solve problems face-to-face, while working in an office can create a team atmosphere
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 better for productivity. Overall, it seems that working from
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 can make life’s worker easier and MORE comfortable.
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, employees should consider carefully whether working from
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 or at the office is the appropriate choice.

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