Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: • Give details of the food and services you ordered • Describe the problems that occurred • Explain what you want the restaurant to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the food and
services
offered during my last
visit. Actually, last
week I came for a dinner with my office colleagues. However
, this
dinner happened to be a big disaster.
On Saturday 27th April, all my office fellows decided to celebrate project success.
So, we decided to dine at your restaurant. I had already reserved a table for four in advance,
so that we do not have to wait in Remove the comma
apply
queue
. Despite, the booking, we still had to wait. Add an article
a queue
the queue
Although
, we got our table, but
still we could not settle down since it was not cleaned. The Remove the conjunction
apply
services
were not very organized. However
, we ordered food which again got delayed, due
less staff. Add the preposition
todue
Also
, we were expecting a an
amazing live band performance, since it was a Choose an article
an
Satudary
. But, later we got to that Correct your spelling
Saturday
due
some internal issues all events have been cancelled.
I have frequently visited your restaurant. But, Add the preposition
todue
this
time I was extremely embarrassed by the overall services
. I want a
compensation for that particular evening. Please provide a 50% discount Remove the article
apply
all
food and Change preposition
on all
services
on our next
visit.
We did not create any scene like other customers because that would hamper your reputation. Hence
, you will understand my request and act on it.
Yours faithfully,
ShreyaSubmitted by shreya1990s on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite