Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: • Give details of the food and services you ordered • Describe the problems that occurred • Explain what you want the restaurant to do

#restaurant #manager #food #services

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the food and

services

offered during my

last

visit. Actually,

last

week I came for a dinner with my office colleagues.

However

this

dinner happened to be a big disaster. On Saturday 27th April, all my office fellows decided to celebrate project success. So, we decided to dine at your restaurant. I had already reserved a table for four in advance

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so that we do not have to wait in

queue

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. Despite, the booking, we still had to wait.

Although

, we got our table,

but

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still we could not settle down since it was not cleaned. The

services

were not very organized.

However

, we ordered food which again got delayed,

due

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less staff.

Also

, we were expecting

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amazing live band performance, since it was a

Satudary

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Saturday

. But, later we got to that

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some internal issues all events have been cancelled. I have frequently visited your restaurant. But,

this

time I was extremely embarrassed by the overall

services

. I want

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compensation for that particular evening. Please provide a 50% discount

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food and

services

on our

visit. We did not create any scene like other customers because that would hamper your reputation.

Hence

, you will understand my request and act on it. Yours faithfully, Shreya

Submitted by shreya1990s on Tue Apr 28 2020

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

219 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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