You are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this. What activities you have planned When the first meeting takes place and where.

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Dear sir or Madam, I am writing to you to request to publish an advertisement in your local newspaper regarding a public meeting that I am going to organise

weekend. As you are well aware that in our town people come from different communities to live here.

Therefore

it is essential to make a small club where people come from different cultures share their experiences with each other to build a healthy society. I started a club named ' lions club' 2 months back and now I planned to organise a get together in Mohali community hall phase 11 on 7th May at 11.a.m. We shall be touching upon various social issues like

environment

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pollution, child amusement and recycling. A short lecture will be delivered by an expert and the best part of

meeting

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the meeting

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is that if anyone from

audience

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the audience

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want

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wants

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to share their thoughts come and join the stage and

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asks

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apply

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questions from the experts. My team doing very hard work on making

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event successful. I hope you would publish

this

advert

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your esteemed local newspaper on coming Sunday. Yours faithfully, John smith

Tue Apr 28 2020

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You are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this. What activities you have planned When the first meeting takes place and where.

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