A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: • explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview

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Sir / Madam, I saw the advertisement in the newspaper given by

this

restaurant for the need of waitresses. I was seeking

for

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apply

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an opportunity to

work

in a prestigious restaurant

from

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a very long time. At present, I am working as a waitress in a small restaurant. I have

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work

experience as a waitress for the past 2.5 years. During

evening

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the evening

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I extending my

work

in a cafe day as a part-time employee as a computer operator. So I have experience in billing

also

. As a

waitress

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it is my duty to please the customers by taking orders as they wish and by serving them in a polite manner. If the customers need any assistance I will be there to provide them in time. So I am suitable for

this

area of

work

as I have enough experience. I would like to attend the interview for

this

post. I have half-day off only on Friday. Shall I attend

this

interview on coming Friday after 12 noon

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Expecting a positive response from you. Regards, Suganthi R

Submitted by rsuganthi08 on Tue Apr 28 2020

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More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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