A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: • explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview

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Sir / Madam, I saw the advertisement in the newspaper given by

this

restaurant for the need of waitresses. I was seeking

for

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an opportunity to

work

in a prestigious restaurant

from

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a very long time. At present, I am working as a waitress in a small restaurant. I have

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work

experience as a waitress for the past 2.5 years. During

evening

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the evening

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I extending my

work

in a cafe day as a part-time employee as a computer operator. So I have experience in billing

also

. As a

waitress

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it is my duty to please the customers by taking orders as they wish and by serving them in a polite manner. If the customers need any assistance I will be there to provide them in time. So I am suitable for

this

area of

work

as I have enough experience. I would like to attend the interview for

this

post. I have half-day off only on Friday. Shall I attend

this

interview on coming Friday after 12 noon

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Expecting a positive response from you. Regards, Suganthi R

Submitted by rsuganthi08 on Tue Apr 28 2020

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