Eating too much sugar is harmful to health. Some people think it is the government’s responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Currently, most of

food

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and drink contain a lot of

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sugar which

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sugar, which

can cause harm to individuals’

health

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. In order to limit an

amount

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of

sugar

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consumption, it is the

government

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’s responsibility to

control

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the

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sugar use

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sugar, use

of the

food

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factories and

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individuals’ responsibility

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an individuals’ responsibility

the individuals’ responsibility

to consider how much

sugar

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they should be consumed. The

government

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has an important role in terms of policy and law establishment to

control

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the quantity of

sugar

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putting in all

kind

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kinds

of

food

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. The

government

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has to restrict the quality of

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food particularly

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food, particularly

the ingredients

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as

sugar

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and salt are used in

food

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manufacturing to ensure that the factories use those ingredients in an appropriate

amount

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.

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, the

government

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has to raise awareness about the danger of

sugar

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overconsumption

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which can lead to

health

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problem like diabetes and obesity. It will be a massive problem for the

government

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in national budget management if their population have those kind of diseases as it has to increase a huge

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of money in

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health services

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the health services

to look after its inhabitants.

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, it is not only the

government

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has an important role

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in

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problem, individuals’ responsibility is

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significant to

control

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the quantity of

sugar

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to be consumed. People have to consider for what kind of

food

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should be eaten in their daily meals by looking at a nutrition

labels

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label

on

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packages.

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it is difficult to

control

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the ingredients which are produced from the factories, people can limit an

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of

sugar

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consumption which contains in foods and drinks. Being healthy is everyone’s requirement, so it starts from individual action in order to achieve

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ambitious goal. Apart from controlling

sugar

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consumption both by

government

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and individual, exercising is another essential component to look after people’s

health

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which can prevent themselves from terminal illnesses in the future.