The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are wave
energy
machines on
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in
diagrams
below. Correct article usage
the diagrams
The devices
of Correct article usage
Devices
such
type are applying
for producing alternative electricity. Nowadays big variety of machines are been used by men around the globe to capture Wrong verb form
applied
energy
from free natural resources.
As scientists say, the
70 per cent of the Earth’s surface is covered by ocean. Correct article usage
apply
That is
why wave
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a wave
energy
machine
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machines
supposed
to be the cheapest way to get Add a missing verb
is supposed
energy
.
The device depicted on diagram
consists of two chambers. One Correct article usage
the diagram
chamber
is above another, so we can name them chamber
of Fix the agreement mistake
chambers
first
and Add an article
the first
second
level
. The Fix the agreement mistake
levels
chamber
of second
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the second
level
contains two turbines and generator
. The principle of work is Correct article usage
a generator
next
: when the fluid fills the
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chamber
number one, the air flow
pushes the turbine threw the space between chambers. Correct your spelling
airflow
Then
turbine
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the turbine
start
rotating and Correct subject-verb agreement
starts
generator
is taking the electricity.
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the generator
On
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In
second
diagram
we see the difference between installation Add a comma
,diagram
level
. Fix the agreement mistake
levels
Due to
the depth of installation
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the installation
level
there will be more Add a comma
,level
powerfull
income air flow but expenses for installation will change Correct your spelling
powerful
accordingly
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