You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate. As you know we share one room, I cannot study in the place at all
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if I still stay there. She always has friends visiting and has parties in the area. They make lots of noise and switch on the radio very loudly, for me
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environment is very difficult to study and I need to be in a
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one. Even borrows my things without asking, it is very impolite. I request you can give me a new
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term because I have been asked her has parties in other places many times they still have parties in the room. I really cannot stay in the same area with her. I would be grateful if you could change me a single room.
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faithfully, Zahra

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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