You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate. As you know we share one room, I cannot study in the place at all

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if I still stay there. She always has friends visiting and has parties in the area. They make lots of noise and switch on the radio very loudly, for me

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environment is very difficult to study and I need to be in a

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one. Even borrows my things without asking, it is very impolite. I request you can give me a new

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term because I have been asked her has parties in other places many times they still have parties in the room. I really cannot stay in the same area with her. I would be grateful if you could change me a single room.

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faithfully, Zahra

Wed Apr 29 2020

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

141 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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