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In many places, shopping is the leisure time activity for young adults. Why is it so? Do you think it is a negative or a positive development?

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In the recent era, the purposes of shopping are changing rapidly. In
few areas
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a few areas
,
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,
the young blood
consider
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considers
 shopping as a free
time
 activity. There are multiple reasons behind
this
 trend
.
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.
 I think
,
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,
 it has
adverse impact
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an adverse impact
 on
the youngers
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the young
the younger
. On leisure the
time
 activity side, the young generation
consider
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considers
 the shopping as a source of entertainment
.
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.
 The
youngers
 go with their friends in the malls and have a lot fun.
For example
, the young masses take the shopping as a party
,
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,
which enhances the enjoyment moments among them
.
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.
 The youngsters go along with their friends and knock the door of freedom from their guardians and enjoy it a lot. Apart from
this
, the young blood is hardly interested to spend
time
 with their family members
,
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,
so to
aviod
stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
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abide
this
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Thus
This
,
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,
 they go outside the house with their siblings. I think
this
 approach has a negative impact on
young generation
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the young generation
.
Firstly
, there are many more leisure
time
 activities for
youngers
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
instead
 of shopping
.
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.
 The shopping without any purpose is a sole reason behind the wastage of money. To illustrate, the
youngers
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
youngest
 spend
massive amount
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massive amounts
a massive amount
 on unnecessary things to show high social status among their friends. The young man
also buy
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also buys
has also bought
 new brands an unquestionably.
Moreover
, the free
time
 is not for wandering. The youngsters waste their golden minutes
on
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to
 shopping complex visit
,
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,
 even they can spend
this
time
 for the social welfare. I think
,
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,
 there are many and various free
time
 activities
.
Accept space
.
 So, the
youngers
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
 should adopt the welfare activities
instead
 of wasting
time
 on shopping.

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