The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? You should write at least 250 words.

The role of females in our daily life fluctuated in recent decades. Various issues youngsters’ reality grew up for the reason why a lot of wedded women work and they are not at

house

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the house

to look after their children. Most people agree that there are both positive and negative aspects of women’s performance.

Although

there’s a reason their children might be clever, overall, I believe there are more difficulties.

First

, women’s implementations cause different difficulties,

such

as

upbringing their

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upbringing, their

children, because they have

lack

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a lack

of attention to children. If

mothers commute

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the mothers commute

to work every day,

then

behavior

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the behaviour

behaviour

of their children might become worse. In my

opinion

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opinion, this

this

is the most significant complication of

laboring

doing arduous or unpleasant work

labouring

ladies. As an example, one of my friend’s mother had a job and she couldn’t manage her time to care for children. I witnessed that

this

affected children’s

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

,

as a result

after a few years she regretted for not being at home and not caring for them. There is

also

beneficial side

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a beneficial side

of working females. One of the best

reason

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reasons

is children might become smart if their mothers are well-educated and responsible for children’s education. Intelligent women try to manage their time for improving their children’s mental abilities,

then

children

also

imitate them.

For example

, my teacher is cleverer than other people, because she tries to pay attention to the education of children, so her child has always achieved high results. To conclude, there are clearly both positive and negative issues regarding that working females, but I feel that there are more problems with

laboring

doing arduous or unpleasant work

labouring

married women and I believe that mothers try to be responsible for children’s life. Words (275)