Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people claim that
governments
need to increase direct taxes
to spend on infrastructures
and educational Fix the agreement mistake
infrastructure
services
, while
others disagree with high taxes
. I believe that a high level of taxations
could create more social equality. On the one hand, critics have some clear arguments against heavy Fix the agreement mistake
taxation
taxes
. Taking a large amount of wages may lead to loss
of incentive forCorrect article usage
a loss
hard-working
. Replace the word
hard work
That is
, Workers might think the money they have worked hard for is being spent on intangible goals, instead
of being spent on betterment of the quality of their lives. On top of that, dissatisfying
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dissatisfaction
from
the high Change preposition
with
tax
may lead to tax
avoidance paying taxes
. For instance
, some try to minimize their tax
payments by some strategies such
as using accounting loopholes. On the other hand
, despite the above-mentioned arguments, I advocate that taxing in
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at
high
rate by Correct article usage
a high
governments
could result in social equality. It means high taxes
will help governments
to ensure that public places are of the highest standards; the places that all members of a society, the poor and the wealthy, can benefit from them. If taxes
are too low, the quality of public services
will decline and eventually, the only individuals who can manage are the rich. In addition
, the more salary people are being paid, the high
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higher
amount
of Correct article usage
the amount
tax
they are being taken. So the wealthiest in society shoulder the biggest burden of tax
payments for improving public services
to be good for everyone, even the disadvantaged. In conclusion, I believe that governments
cannot guarantee high quality
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high-quality
of
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services
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion