Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people claim that
governments
need to increase direct
taxes
to spend on
infrastructures
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infrastructure
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and educational
services
,
while
others disagree with high
taxes
. I believe that a high level of
taxations
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could create more social equality. On the one hand, critics have some clear arguments against heavy
taxes
. Taking a large amount of wages may lead to
loss
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of incentive for
hard-working
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.
That is
, Workers might think the money they have worked hard for is being spent on intangible goals,
instead
of being spent on betterment of the quality of their lives. On top of that,
dissatisfying
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from
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the high
tax
may lead to
tax
avoidance paying
taxes
.
For instance
, some try to minimize their
tax
payments by some strategies
such
as using accounting loopholes.
On the other hand
, despite the above-mentioned arguments, I advocate that taxing
in
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high
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a high
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rate by
governments
could result in social equality. It means high
taxes
will help
governments
to ensure that public places are of the highest standards; the places that all members of a society, the poor and the wealthy, can benefit from them. If
taxes
are too low, the quality of public
services
will decline and eventually, the only individuals who can manage are the rich.
In addition
, the more salary people are being paid, the
high
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amount
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the amount
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of
tax
they are being taken. So the wealthiest in society shoulder the biggest burden of
tax
payments for improving public
services
to be good for everyone, even the disadvantaged. In conclusion, I believe that
governments
cannot guarantee
high quality
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of
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public
services
and social equality without taking a large part of salaries.

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