Some believe that TV has negatively impacted communication between friends and family. What is your opinion?
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is a reflection of human life, it provide differe
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provides
for example
news, comedy shows, cooking … etc. Ev
eryone wants to know what is going on around them and all over the world, Accept space
…
for instance
, nowadays all of us are willing to hear and watch TV
to know about the pandemic of coronavirus as well
as the treatments, vaccines, and what new discoveries are being made each day
? we are ta
king most of these inSuggestion
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this information
TV
channels. Although
we can't say whether watching television
is useful or not, it depends on how people use it? I agree with the above text that TV
has negatively impacted communication between friends and family, their relationship is weakened by watching television
for several reasons:
Firstly
, those who are watching television
all day
long, defiantly they don’t have enough time
to do physical activities and sports. Some people are sitting on sofas all day
and watching television
for several hours that causes to reduce their physical activities and badly impacted on their health. in addit
io
n, health experts say that watching Suggestion
In
television
more than three hours a day
will have a great bad effect on our health, more ever making us anti-social, fatigue and tired during the day
as well as will cause some diseases such
as diabetes, overweight, obesity, high cholesterol level, high blood pressure, insomnia, and even death.
Secondly
, watching too much television
can adversely effect on children's ongoing relationships, to illustrate they see a person on television
that he has a knife in his hand and killing someone then our chi
ldren may imitate his action and will injure their younger brothers or sisters. Accept comma addition
someone, then
Television
has impacted people's daily lives, social and family relationships, and they do not pay attention to their children's training at the same time
their daily educational activities. Television
viewing frequently limits children’s time
for vital activities such
as playing, reading, learning to talk, spending time
with peers and family, participating in regular exercise, and developing other necessary physical, mental and social skills
In conclusion, with all disadvantages of watching TV
that I have just mentioned above, I’m also
convinced with this
text that television
has destroyed people's lives, their family and friends' relationships and negatively affected their behaviors.
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
That is
to say, those people who spend most of their precious time
on watching television
, they do not have enough time
to interact with their families and friends, which can also
harm their children's education and their relationships with friends, even having a bad impact on their healthy bodies. I personally believe that television
is a necessity for our lives but everyth
ing has to be used appropriately, in essence anything less is medicine, the average Accept comma addition
lives, but
is food and the
high dose is poisonous even love! Let’s start reading books Suggestion
food is average
instead
of watching TV
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