QUESTION – 1 : WRITE A LETTER TO LOCAL AUTHORITIES BY REQUESTING ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES FOR YOUR AGE GROUP IN YOUR AREA. - MENTION ABOUT THE CURRENT SPORT FACILITIES AVAILABLE. - WHAT KIND OF ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES SHOULD BE INTRODUCED. - HOW THE NEW SPORTS FACILITIES WOULD BE A HELP FOR THE PEOPLE IN YOUR AGE GROUP

Dear Sir, I, Riken Patel, reside in the northern part of the realm, where your commands are followed. I am writing
this
letter to you to upgrade fitness and
sport
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centre in
this
site. As of now, there are nearly good amenities available for the youth. Like, Small cricket ground, table tennis,
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volleyball
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volley ball
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court etc. Apart from
this
, Gym is
also
here, which is run by
corporate
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officer. And youth are really happy with it. But, there is not any proper space to play badminton, football and tennis. Nearby
this
fitness centre, ample space, where, wastage is dumped by local people. If you wish, you could utilize it in
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way by resurfacing it and
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engineering work. By doing
this
, the working people can
also
utilize the facilities by playing the sport whatever they like.
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, they get
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of their workloads, sedentary life and unhealthy life span. I am waiting for your positive response.
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sincerely, Riken Patel.

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