QUESTION – 1 : WRITE A LETTER TO LOCAL AUTHORITIES BY REQUESTING ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES FOR YOUR AGE GROUP IN YOUR AREA. - MENTION ABOUT THE CURRENT SPORT FACILITIES AVAILABLE. - WHAT KIND OF ADDITIONAL SPORTS FACILITIES SHOULD BE INTRODUCED. - HOW THE NEW SPORTS FACILITIES WOULD BE A HELP FOR THE PEOPLE IN YOUR AGE GROUP

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Dear Sir, I, Riken Patel, reside in the northern part of the realm, where your commands are followed. I am writing

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letter to you to upgrade fitness and

sport

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centre in

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site. As of now, there are nearly good amenities available for the youth. Like, Small cricket ground, table tennis,

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volleyball

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volley ball

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court etc. Apart from

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, Gym is

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here, which is run by

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officer. And youth are really happy with it. But, there is not any proper space to play badminton, football and tennis. Nearby

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fitness centre, ample space, where, wastage is dumped by local people. If you wish, you could utilize it in

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way by resurfacing it and

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engineering work. By doing

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, the working people can

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utilize the facilities by playing the sport whatever they like.

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, they get

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of their workloads, sedentary life and unhealthy life span. I am waiting for your positive response.

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sincerely, Riken Patel.

Fri May 01 2020

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
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for example
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even though
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

161 words

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