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Nowadays museums have become more and more important. What are the purposes of places such as museums and how should they be funded?

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Currently, people are prone to be fading away and even be jeopardized conventional architectures.
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, there are several purposes for museums and galleries and a series of steps being taken are expected to preserve and strengthen the importance of these traditional buildings. At the outset, the main function of museums and galleries are to demonstrate local citizens the fact in regard to their ancestors’ lifestyle
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traditional heritages
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as well as local cultures
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In other word, it is
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 one of the best means to educate children
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 the way that it creates a favourable condition for teenagers to gain deeper insight into the sacrifice of our
predeccesors
one who precedes you in time (as in holding a position or office)
predecessors
 and cultivate patriotism. Meanwhile
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by enhancing the statue of museums domestic economy and countries’ image will be promoted because of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
industry which
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industry, which
 could appeal a surge growth number of worldwide tourists by the charm of local architectures. Encountering these potential targets, the governments have to take steps to preserve and upgrade these traditional values.
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, Governments could invest
large amount
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large amounts
a large amount
 of money on social
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
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 as TV or newspaper to promote museums and galleries image to emphasize the merits the traditional buildings bring
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and restore the appearance of it.
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, it could raise citizen’s awareness about traditional
identites
the distinct personality of an individual regarded as a persisting entity
identities
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in terms of educating
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next generation
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the next generation
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government
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the government
 should spare no efforts to set up
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 educational fund. Authorities
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for instance
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could organize adolescences to visit it
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and advocate that only by face-to-face could they appreciate the real values of
culture
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the culture
 and spirits in their country
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and enjoy historical and aesthetic atmosphere in the conventional architectures
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 In my conclusion, without these conventional architectures
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we would lose valuable treasures and are likely to be at a loss under the background of globalization when overseas cultures intrude
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, nothing is more important to
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make
 a considerable investment fund on traditional buildings.
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