WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that difference is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
With the increase of global economic and technological development,
people
's opinion of the best way to spend their time
time
spending on Remove the redundancy
apply
things
has changed, thus
making us try different things
to gain new experience
. Some Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
people
would love to spend time
on the same things
while
others prefer to change
the activities they do in life over time
. This
essay will argue that it doesn’t matter whether not matter if you change
or not as both ways have advantages and disadvantages. However
I believe that Add a comma
However,
change
changing would be is
better for life. Let me explore both sides of Unnecessary verb
apply
this
issue. There are some benefits and drawbacks in
doing the same Change preposition
to
things
for a long time
. In a job or career, employees who remain consistent in their work would develop proficient skills
. For example
, if people
keep working as tour guides in the tourist industry, they would produce
develop more professional managing administrative and communication Verb problem
will
skills
. However
, these tour guides might not be happy doing the same thing year in year
out. If Correct word choice
and year
people
work on the same thing, as
they will would get bored with the routine. Correct word choice
apply
Therefore
, people
would practice well their skills
by repeating the same words even though they would be experienced and expert professional guides but they would lose interest in it one day and feel a need to try different/new things
. Meanwhile, There are also
pros and cons to changing the daily routine. One typical advantage is that people
can try different things
to gain new experience. For instance
, if people
change
jobs, they might make new friends and develop new skills
in different positions. However
, the con disadvantage is that people
would not make progress in their career
because they would not stay long enough to gain important Fix the agreement mistake
careers
skills
and be promoted. certain circumstances. People
would not be able to receive opportunities to get promoted in their job career
in companies because they do not spendFix the agreement mistake
careers
more
enough Correct quantifier usage
apply
time
practicing
Change the spelling
practising
skills
in the position they work in on. Consequently
, so
we can see that changing the daily routine creates benefits for Correct word choice
apply
people
, but at the same time
, they have to lose
sacrifice something certain opportunities for Verb problem
apply
change
in other areas. In conclusion, even though change
in life/making changes changing the daily routine has advantages and disadvantages, I believe that changing what we do would be
is rewarding because, as long as Verb problem
apply
people
do not change
too fast in the method, they can learn proficient skills
in the previous routine, and apply and adapt those skills
to different situations later.Submitted by hongthomas69 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion