The diagram shows how the rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in Australia.
The given diagram gives data about
different
steps of rain filtration to produce drinking water in one of the Australian towns.
Correct article usage
the different
Linking Words
At
the first stage, rainwater drops out from the roof of the house to the tube. Afterwards, it goes through the water filter and turns to Change preposition
In
the
storage. From the storage, it goes through the tube to another box with chemicals. Correct article usage
apply
At
that box, water is treated Change preposition
In
by
chemical elements to be filtered. After proper filtration, it rises through the tube to the Change preposition
with
peoples’
Change noun form
people’s
house
.Fix the agreement mistake
houses
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