Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I, Oguzhan Cinar, wish to apply for the Master in “
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Economics and
Management
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” at the University College London for the 2020
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21 intake. Having the chance to be part of a selected group of highly regarded and talented students, would be an extremely valuable opportunity to gain advanced critical understanding and make a positive impact on my
career
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in the
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construction
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industry. The
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construction
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sector acts as a locomotive
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for
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in
the economies in developing countries. I realized that many
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construction
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executives, who play a key
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in the
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construction
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economy, came only from the civil engineering
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context, I strongly believed that the managers of large-scale
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construction
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companies should have a solid
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in
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economics.
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, I observed that the master courses in the sphere of economics are very limited in most of the
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construction
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management
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master programmes, except for UCL. The main reason I want to
enroll
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Master Programme is that I am convinced the compulsory module will give me a solid base on
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which to build my
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.
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, since I am already experienced in mega infrastructure projects, I strongly believe that after attending courses
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as “
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Industry Development” and “Strategic Financial
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of
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and Infrastructure Projects”, I would gain a solid academic
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as well. While attending university, I decided that I had to improve myself in the subjects of
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construction economy
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the construction economy
, finance, financing models of infrastructure projects,
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control
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and budgeting. In fact,
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the technical courses, I focused on
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management
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, economics, mathematics courses and I acquired essential skills related to engineering science.
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, I was awarded to develop my dissertation in the
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construction
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management
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field where only the projects coming from the best students in
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construction
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management
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and related courses are accepted. I wrote my
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on “Process of Innovation in
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Construction
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& Financing of Innovation and Infrastructure Projects”. The
thesis
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has 3 main parts which are; - Innovation, The Process of Innovation and Its Application
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for
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- Financing of Innovation Projects - Financing of Infrastructure Projects. After completion of the
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and graduated from the university, the
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had been accepted by
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and
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Construction
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Management
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Conference (In Turkish abbreviated as PYYK) to be presented in the conference.
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my academic
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, I would like to underline
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the professional
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to prove I meet the requirement of the programme. In
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the last year
of my university studies, I was offered a long-term internship for a
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Control
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Engineer position in Dogus Group, which is one of the biggest investment company in Turkey. During the time from 09
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2015 to 07
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2016, I have taken an active
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in more than 40 domestic and international projects in the scope of fit-out, hotel, renovation
project
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from the pre-contracting part to post-contracting processes. Thanks to
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long-term internship, I have gained
cost
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control
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, quantity surveying, subcontractors
management
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and negotiation skills. After I graduated and completed the internship, the subsidiary of the Dogus
Group which
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Group, which
is Dogus
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Construction
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and
Trade wherein
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Trade, wherein
the top 250 in ENR list, has offered me for “
Cost
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Control
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and
Budget
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Engineer” position in Al-Rayyan Road
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Construction
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and Improvement
Project
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which has a value of 1.3 B USD and located in Doha, Qatar. My main
role
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was to update the activity-based
budget
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daily basis,
calculation
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the calculation
of the
cost
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of the
BoQ
a written work or composition that has been published (printed on pages bound together)
book
items and claims as per CEESM4, which was the base of Global Settlement Agreement
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related to changing
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the contract type
from unit rate to lump sum. I
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have involved in the tender processes for 2 projects in Qatar. During the tender process, I calculated the direct
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of the tender for both
project
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and submitted to the related
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Manager. After a year, I gained skills
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as the topics of Global Settlement issues, Tendering in International Environments, Calculation of the
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of the Claims and Submission of the
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, I agreed with Yapi Merkezi
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Construction
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and Industry Inc (Wherein top 250 in ENR) for the SGR
project
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located in the city of Tanzania, Dar
es
a radioactive transuranic element produced by bombarding plutonium with neutrons
Es
Salaam for
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Control
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Engineer position. The
project
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consists in the
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construction
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of a high-speed railway that will increase the capacity of transportation of the materials, goods and the people from
Dar
to a considerable degree; very much
far
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a radioactive transuranic element produced by bombarding plutonium with neutrons
Es
Salaam to Morogoro and the contract value is 1.2 Billion of USD. In July 2017, I moved to Tanzania and set up the
cost
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control
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and related system in the
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. After I prepared the
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budget
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of the
Project
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, I decided to improve and develop the
budget
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reporting format of the company. In fact, I submitted the
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as an Activity Based as well as
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Code Based so it allowed me to follow the expenditures more accurately. It was the most significant innovation
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, the Company has saved a huge amount of money and decreased the unnecessary expenses so that the profit margin has been increased. Thanks to working in Africa and the Middle East, I had the opportunity to realize that mega projects like infrastructure projects have huge importance for the economy of developing countries. I clearly saw how
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decrease the unemployment rates, increase the turnover of the local suppliers and subcontractors, but
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affect the politicians.
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, for main contractor aspects, I closely monitored and witnessed that the tax optimizations have a critical impact on
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profit margin as well as logistic problems could impact not only profit margin but
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completion dates and claims, which means a
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’s destiny. Since the
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years of my professional life as aforementioned above, I skilled in forecasting, budgeting, activity-based
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cost
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-code based budgeting,
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accounting, earned value analysis, claims
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Vos, global settlement issues, subcontractor and supplier
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and
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control
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disciplines as well as I
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worked closely with related departments. After 5 years of experience, I strongly believed that the MSc in
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at the University College London represent to me excellent opportunity to be provided with highly interdisciplinary knowledge on topics that I have already dealt with on the practical side. I am entirely convinced that it could be the springboard for my
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, and I would like to emphasize that I am eligible for the Master of
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Economics and
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. After completion of the master
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, I would like to continue my
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in international
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companies, investment banks
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and finance area meets. In conclusion, I appreciate you considering my application and I would be honoured to be part of your Master’s in
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Economics and
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at the University College London for the 2020
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21 intake. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
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