Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I, Oguzhan Cinar, wish to apply for the Master in “
Construction
Economics and
Management
” at the University College London for the 2020
/
21 intake. Having the chance to be part of a selected group of highly regarded and talented students, would be an extremely valuable opportunity to gain advanced critical understanding and make a positive impact on my
career
in the
construction
industry. The
construction
sector acts as a locomotive
role
for
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in
the economies in developing countries. I realized that many
construction
executives, who play a key
role
in the
construction
economy, came only from the civil engineering
background
. In
this
context, I strongly believed that the managers of large-scale
construction
companies should have a solid
background
in
construction
economics.
Besides
, I observed that the master courses in the sphere of economics are very limited in most of the
construction
management
master programmes, except for UCL. The main reason I want to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
in
this
Master Programme is that I am convinced the compulsory module will give me a solid base on
which build my
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which to build my
future
career
.
Moreover
, since I am already experienced in mega infrastructure projects, I strongly believe that after attending courses
such
as “
Construction
Industry Development” and “Strategic Financial
Management
of
Construction
and Infrastructure Projects”, I would gain a solid academic
background
as well. While attending university, I decided that I had to improve myself in the subjects of
construction economy
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the construction economy
, finance, financing models of infrastructure projects,
cost
control
and budgeting. In fact,
besides
the technical courses, I focused on
project
management
, economics, mathematics courses and I acquired essential skills related to engineering science.
Furthermore
, I was awarded to develop my dissertation in the
construction
management
field where only the projects coming from the best students in
construction
management
and related courses are accepted. I wrote my
thesis
on “Process of Innovation in
Construction
& Financing of Innovation and Infrastructure Projects”. The
thesis
has 3 main parts which are; - Innovation, The Process of Innovation and Its Application
on
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for
Construction
- Financing of Innovation Projects - Financing of Infrastructure Projects. After completion of the
thesis
and graduated from the university, the
thesis
had been accepted by
Project
and
Construction
Management
Conference (In Turkish abbreviated as PYYK) to be presented in the conference.
Besides
my academic
background
, I would like to underline
also
the professional
background
to prove I meet the requirement of the programme. In
last year
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the last year
of my university studies, I was offered a long-term internship for a
Project
Control
Engineer position in Dogus Group, which is one of the biggest investment company in Turkey. During the time from 09
/
2015 to 07
/
2016, I have taken an active
role
in more than 40 domestic and international projects in the scope of fit-out, hotel, renovation
project
from the pre-contracting part to post-contracting processes. Thanks to
this
long-term internship, I have gained
cost
control
, quantity surveying, subcontractors
management
and negotiation skills. After I graduated and completed the internship, the subsidiary of the Dogus
Group which
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Group, which
is Dogus
Construction
and
Trade wherein
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Trade, wherein
the top 250 in ENR list, has offered me for “
Cost
Control
and
Budget
Engineer” position in Al-Rayyan Road
Construction
and Improvement
Project
which has a value of 1.3 B USD and located in Doha, Qatar. My main
role
was to update the activity-based
budget
daily basis,
calculation
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the calculation
of the
cost
of the
BoQ
a written work or composition that has been published (printed on pages bound together)
book
items and claims as per CEESM4, which was the base of Global Settlement Agreement
that is
related to changing
contract type
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the contract type
from unit rate to lump sum. I
also
have involved in the tender processes for 2 projects in Qatar. During the tender process, I calculated the direct
cost
of the tender for both
project
and submitted to the related
Project
Manager. After a year, I gained skills
such
as the topics of Global Settlement issues, Tendering in International Environments, Calculation of the
Cost
of the Claims and Submission of the
BoQ’s
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Box
Items and SWOT analysis.
Moreover
, I agreed with Yapi Merkezi
Construction
and Industry Inc (Wherein top 250 in ENR) for the SGR
project
located in the city of Tanzania, Dar
es
a radioactive transuranic element produced by bombarding plutonium with neutrons
Es
Salaam for
Cost
Control
Engineer position. The
project
consists in the
construction
of a high-speed railway that will increase the capacity of transportation of the materials, goods and the people from
Dar
to a considerable degree; very much
far
es
a radioactive transuranic element produced by bombarding plutonium with neutrons
Es
Salaam to Morogoro and the contract value is 1.2 Billion of USD. In July 2017, I moved to Tanzania and set up the
cost
control
and related system in the
Project
. After I prepared the
first
budget
of the
Project
, I decided to improve and develop the
budget
reporting format of the company. In fact, I submitted the
budget
as an Activity Based as well as
Cost
Code Based so it allowed me to follow the expenditures more accurately. It was the most significant innovation
for
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in
the
project
and thanks to
this
, the Company has saved a huge amount of money and decreased the unnecessary expenses so that the profit margin has been increased. Thanks to working in Africa and the Middle East, I had the opportunity to realize that mega projects like infrastructure projects have huge importance for the economy of developing countries. I clearly saw how
megaprojects
decrease the unemployment rates, increase the turnover of the local suppliers and subcontractors, but
also
affect the politicians.
On the other hand
, for main contractor aspects, I closely monitored and witnessed that the tax optimizations have a critical impact on
project
profit margin as well as logistic problems could impact not only profit margin but
also
completion dates and claims, which means a
project
’s destiny. Since the
first
years of my professional life as aforementioned above, I skilled in forecasting, budgeting, activity-based
/
cost
-code based budgeting,
cost
accounting, earned value analysis, claims
/
Vos, global settlement issues, subcontractor and supplier
management
and
project
control
disciplines as well as I
also
worked closely with related departments. After 5 years of experience, I strongly believed that the MSc in
Construction
Economics and
Management
at the University College London represent to me excellent opportunity to be provided with highly interdisciplinary knowledge on topics that I have already dealt with on the practical side. I am entirely convinced that it could be the springboard for my
career
, and I would like to emphasize that I am eligible for the Master of
Construction
Economics and
Management
. After completion of the master
programme
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program
, I would like to continue my
career
in international
construction
companies, investment banks
such
as EBRD or Exim Banks where
construction
and finance area meets. In conclusion, I appreciate you considering my application and I would be honoured to be part of your Master’s in
Construction
Economics and
Management
at the University College London for the 2020
/
21 intake. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
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  • poverty alleviation
  • economic inequality
  • developing nations
  • foreign aid
  • sustainable growth
  • technical assistance
  • expertise
  • infrastructure
  • education
  • fair trade
  • trade barriers
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