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Millions of people every year move to English- speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language?

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Nowadays,
language
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the language
 becomes a major factor to become a successful person. Many people prefer to study abroad
to
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in
English-speaking country
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an English - speaking country
English - speaking countries
 because English is an international
language
. There is no doubt that the best way to improve the English
language
 skill is to use the English
language
daily so
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daily, so
 if people study in English speaking countries, their English skill will be improved automatically and it will give them some advantages
such
 as they can work in many countries or they will be able travelling to many different places without studying other languages.
This
 essay will describe in detail why English is an important international
language
.
Firstly
, the English
language
 is widely used in many countries and at present, the world traders are currently developing rapidly. In order to compete with people from different countries, it is very essential to be able to communicate with the English
language
.
For example
, China has been improving a lot in many sectors. They are able to compete with other countries because many people in China aware the important English
language
 and they are trying hard to study English.
Secondly
, many companies prefer to employ people who can speak English because if the companies create
new
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a new branch
new branches
branch
 in different countries, the employers are able to move the new
branch
 without employ new people and the
branch
 company is still able to communicate with the central company. In fact, one of the largest companies in the world (Google) has created some
branch
 in different countries and each of the Google
employers
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
 is able to discuss things or
otherwise
 communicate even though they are in different countries because they all use English to communicate. In conclusion, many people move to English speaking countries for
further
 studies because they believe that it will improve their English skills and in order to become a successful person in the future, mastering English is very essential.

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