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Nowadays companies and other organisations are requiring their employees to wear uniform. Think about jobs where uniform is important. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?

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Some of the corporate companies and organisations have been implemented
uniform
 culture for their employees as daily wares
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 Does
this
 have any importance in
work
 life in
this
 period of time
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 There are pros and cons of
this
 practise
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 The following paragraph would shed the light on the topic before making any final note
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 To commence with the bright side
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uniform
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the uniform
 will give uniformity among the employees
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 especially the people who
work
 in the field of factories, hospitals and people who do laborious jobs.
Hence
, they don't feel any disparity between them
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Some company's hierarchy believes in the idea and from the top management to bottom all wear
uniform
 to promote the corporate value equality.The concept has whether you are doing
bottom level
Suggestion
the bottom level work
work
 or you have carried the top most post all humans are equal and the job you are doing has at most dignity in all sense
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One of the advantage is you don't need to spend a lot of money to wear an executive style dress on a daily basis
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 Addicting to that many companies believes that
this
 would be an advantage for their company's reputation. On the flip side of the coin, critics predominantly argue that
this
 practice never brings any equality and standers to the employees rather
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,
this
 is just a corporate gimmick to show the world they are protecting and practising the corporate responsibility and values.
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they argue that when the huge pay parity is evident in any hierarchy there it will be a trivial practice
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 One of the disadvantages of
this
 practice would be if a person loves to wear a nice outfit on a daily basis
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 especially women employees it will be monotonous to wear
uniform
 as part of the daily chores. Hammering the
last
 nail, since both the arguments are strong
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it all depend on the people's liberty to choose whom they want to
work
 in
this
 era. It is all depended on someone's perception on their
work
 life. Presumably, clothing wouldn't make any much difference to their career or life.

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