An increasing number of people work from home these days and stay in touch with their office using computer technology. What are the effects on employees of working from home?

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Developments in
cyber-space
a computer network consisting of a worldwide network of computer networks that use the TCP/IP network protocols to facilitate data transmission and exchange
cyberspace
in the recent years increased the amount of workers that attempt their jobs through the internet while sitting at
home
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.
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action
is opening
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opens
some new horizons and has a plethora of effects on employees, whether positive or negative, that will be discussed in the following essay. The most valuable positive effect of working from
home
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- is
time
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gaining, so people can manage their
time
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effectively and use in purpose of self-development. Meditations, affirmations, visualizations, those are the little from the whole list of a new opportunities that came
instead
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of staying in congestion.
For instance
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, my dad felt the real improvements in his health after only month of working at
home
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, because he started to engage with self-developing things (sports, reading books, meditations) as exchanged unproductive hours in the office with free
time
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.
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,
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method might improve family relationships since there is more
time
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received
to
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with
concern about closest people. In
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way, parents can monitor their children’s study or playing,
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, actively participate in their education.
On the other hand
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, using computer technologies can be hardly accepted by
older population
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the older population
, especially over 40’s that commonly unfamiliar with digital services. Since
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method requires the new skills from workers, adaptation period might continue for a long
time
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,
therefore
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leave employees without capital source.
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why digital market, where the most
capital registered
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capital, registered
, is more interested by
younger population
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a younger population
rather than experienced and old individuals.
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, most companies perform special educational courses of “online” working for every employee, so
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problem is already under correction. In conclusion, expansion of digital, “online” working is reaching all the edges of the world and replaces traditional jobs, leading both positive,
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as,
time
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and family relationships and negative (hard adaptation of the adults) effects. Despite
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, working from
home
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is a clear example of the development of human society, so in overall has more positive effects.

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