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Your English teacher told you about Write and Improve and said you should use it to practise and improve your English writing. Your teacher has asked you to write a report about your experience with Write and Improve, describing what you liked or didn’t like about it and why. Finish by saying whether you would recommend your classmates to try it. Write your report.

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Writing is one of the most incredible skill that anyone could master, as compared to any other skills.
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, achieving
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 an amazing high-level writing needs lot of practise, sufficient knowledge and guidance from a mentor, which is made possible by
british
of or relating to or characteristic of Great Britain or its people or culture
British
 council through a platform named as write and improve.
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 of all, the primary reason to like
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 program is the way
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 writing course have been created, as it is payment free, flexible and instantaneous correction method.
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, if a user
have just finished
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has just finished
 the task, the results are published within
fraction
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a fraction
fractions
 of a
second
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, which I think is impossible with any other source of
education program
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the education program
.
On the other hand
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, the major factor which dissatisfies users while taking
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 program is about the payment for certain parts of the course.
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,
inorder
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in order
 to take exam topics, like IELTS in
this
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 course have made chargeable on a monthly basis, which is hard for
majority
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the majority
a majority
 of the people as they are from poor background.
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, I think it would be helpful if the authorities of the council could come up and take action against payment issue
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 that it will definitely help a vast majority of the population to acquire the remarkable skill of writing.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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