Many parents complain about violence promoted their children through video games, TV programs and other media. Why is it happening? What can be the solution for it?

It is claimed by parents that video games,
TV
programs and other media have provoked
further
violence
in their
children
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children's
lives. In
this
essay will be discussed the main
problem thereby
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problem, thereby
there are so many ways that
violence
is propagated, following by the possible solution
pass
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is passed
through advise families of best practices to do it so. The main problem that needs to be considered is based on the
violence
is propagated in the video games,
TV
programmes and other type of entertainment.
This
means that when those programs and games are produced, the main objective in made it must far-reaching the majority of the ages target. In spite of the fact
this
strategy does not concern the consequences of what might be created in the
children
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child's
mind, when doing so it is
parents responsibility
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the parents responsibility
to take action in order to protect their offspring.
For example
, many academic studies reveal that the majority of the video games are made to cover at least three ages,
however
, they pull two ages
down
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down, then
then
is supposed,
such
as the game XPTO with provokes stress,
violent
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violence
and the
graphics
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graphic
design
are
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is
similar to reality. One immediate practical solution is to advertise families members of best practices to deal with the unknown of the
entertainment
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entertaining
contents. In
this
way, the
fist
the first or highest in an ordering or series
first
step should be details of
TV
program, watching with them children and explain to them the meaning of the actions are not real, and if it is too violent they should not watch it again, and the main time write down an email to the responsible for the programme with suggestion to advertise on upper right corner of the television.
For instance
,
few years
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a few years
ago, one of my friends did not like of the
TV
content from two to five year-old and she wrote down an email to TVI (
TV
channel) and complained about the lack of gratuitous
violence
for young children.
As a result
, the removed that program
in
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at
that early time. To sum up, it is clear that
violence
is disseminated by differences
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
among the young people, while adults must take action and control the situation,
first
prohibited those ones to watch and
second
as a good citizen complain
with
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to
the right responsible. Obviously, youths do not understand why they cannot attend that kind of information and might be unhappy, but it is in
this
way society protects the future of the nation.
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