Write about the following topic. When talking about success, we often think of people who are rich or famous. In your opinion, what are the qualities that characterise a successful person? Why do you think these should be the criteria? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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In the modern word everyone want to become a successful person and try best to do so. Some people think those who have
money
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those are
successful
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successful, however
however
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some consider famous personalities are at
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level of success. In my opinion famous people are successful and why I will explain in following paragraphs.  There are a number of arguments in favour of
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stance. The most preponderant
one
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is hard
work
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to achieve name. As it is very easy to spoil reputation by doing only
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wrong
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work but
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work, but
it is very difficult to reach
upto
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up to
that point where everyone become known to you and your personality. Every
work
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is paid so it is not much
hard
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harder
to earn
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money which
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money, which
is
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necessary to live
happy life
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a happy life
happy lives
. Doing something good or with talent always help us to go forward. 
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, with hard
work
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to become known in the small town or world
one
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can earn
money
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also
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.
For
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example there
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example, there
are so many famous actors and actresses who have reputation as well and they are rich
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, but no
one
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need
money
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from them
just have
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just has
dreams
to meet
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meet
them which is a real achievement. In the way of
good qualities
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the good qualities
of a person,
one
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should be hard working, cooperative, friendly and down to earth. With these characteristics
one
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can earn both fame and
money
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. To put
into
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in
nutshell
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a nutshell
, becoming rich only make that person
happy but
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happy, but
famous people
gives
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give
happiness to so many others and they become ideal for them.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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