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Some people think that the best way to stay fit is joining a gym or health clubs. While others think That doing everyday activities such as walking or climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both aspects give Your Own opinion

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There is a saying "Good health is the sister of beauty" I would concur with both the opinions of staying fit, be it joining a
gym
 or do activities
such
 as walking or climbing stairs. In today's fast moving world, technology is at your doorstep. You don't have to have those long walks to get something for yourself, everything is delivered at your doorstep with a single click of a button. All your needs are met without having to take that extra mile to move your body and get things done. The lifestyle has changed so much more that people care less for their health.
Hence
, enrolling
onself
reflexive form of "one"
oneself
 in a
gym
 or doing a daily walk is essentially good for the body because, you feel good about yourself. In concurrent with physical fitness, mental fitness is essential too. The mind and the body
has
Suggestion
have
 to go hand in hand to call yourself healthy. Before one decides on the above options to stay healthy, one has to
writedown
Suggestion
write down
 their daily routine and understand how much time they could spend at a
gym
 or just walking. If a person decides to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
 himself or herself in
gym
Suggestion
the gym
,
then
 he/she must be a person who commutes to work by a private vehicle or by some public vehicle. Or they should have the habit of waking up early and do some cycling or walking. Most often, in cities due to pollution, only some people embrace the idea of walking. Either they have a group who motivates them to do
this
 daily or a walking partner. In the case of small towns or villages accessibility to gyms are quite less along with doorstep technologies.
Hence
 people are quite happy walking or cycling even during odd hours, because
that is
 how they get their work done. So, in
conclusion be
Accept comma addition
conclusion, be
 it
gym
 or walking, always adopt consistency or make it a habit to yield results. Because only when you
sow you
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sow, you
 reap!

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