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The bar chart shows the percentage of people who have moved house either in last 3 years,between 3years to 5 years,not within the last 5 years

The bar chart shows the percentage of people who have moved house either in last 3 years,between 3years to 5 years,not within the last 5 years
#bar #percentage #people #house #years
The information illustrated makes comparisons
the
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 proportion of emigrants who have migrated to new houses falling into four age
bracket
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 in three different
years
 types.
While
 the rate of emigration fluctuated in the bar chart,
it is clear that
 the vast majority of number
people
 moved
house
 between 3 to 5
years
 ago,
whereas
people
in
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the
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aged 50 or
more
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vice
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and vice
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 versa. Looking at the detail,
people
 from 40 to 49 aged who migrated
new
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 residence over a period of 2
years
 was the highest percentage in total, reaching a level of 55%.At the same
this
aged
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,
people
 tended not
moved
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to move
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house
 in
last
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the last
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 5
year
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years
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 was just above one-three compared to the ratio of
people
changed
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who changed
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address
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their address
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 in
last
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the last
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 3
years
, with 14%.A
similarly
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 proportion of 50 or older aged who moved
house
 3 to 5
years
 ago as high as that of not within
last
 5
years
. One of the considerable points
that
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,
at
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the same ratio of
people
 emigrated in all three various
years
 kinds of 20 to 29 aged and 30 to 39 aged.The ratio of
people
 from 20 to 29 aged moved
house
 3 to 5 year just a bit higher than that of not within
last
 5
years
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, people, house with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 4 times.
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