The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK,divided into 3 categories ,from 1995-2002.

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number of

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of telephone communication in the UK between the years 1995-2002.

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sum of the phone calls

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into 3 classifications(local,national and international and mobiles).Units are measured in

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local calls have been a leader

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the total number of calls

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national and international calls rise

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a significant rate

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each year.Mobile calls began from scratch,

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fair progress. In 1999 local calls reached their maximum

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90

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minutes

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consequence calls sharply declined to just over 70

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.What cannot be said about national and international calls,

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the fact that from the year 1995 to 1999 amount of calls slightly increased,

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between 2000-2002 grew up with

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difference. In terms of mobiles was spot that in comparison with national calls mobiles inclined with a certain rate.In 2002 the sum of the calls of these two was approximately above each other.