You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with sharing the
room
with my roommate. As you are aware that I and Steph share
room
no 22A, I
no
Add a missing verb
am no
show examples
longer interested in sharing the
room
with her. For the past 2 weeks, She is acting weird in the
room
. She brings her friends all the time and makes loud noises while I am sleeping. I requested her many times not to disturb me with loud music and big talks with her friends.
Also
, I asked her a couple of times to change her
behavior
Change the spelling
behaviour
show examples
and help me concentrate on my studies. Sometimes, she uses my personal belongings without asking me. I am really upset with her attitude. I want my roommate to have good manners(definitely not someone like Steph). I would prefer a person who focuses more on studies rather than parties and hanging out
friends
Change preposition
with friends
show examples
. I request you to please change my
room
and provide a well-mannered person as my roommate. I hope you understand my situation. Thanks. Your's sincerely,
abc
Correct your spelling
ABC

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: